Feedback for Jamie's Draft Evaluation

Jamie, your draft evaluation looks good so far, and you have addressed all the questions quite comprehensively. The answers should total between 1000 and 1500 words though, so you will need to edit it down significantly (at present yours comes it at just over 2000 words). Your answer to the first question is particularly lengthy, so perhaps you could think about expressing your answer to that one more concisely and succinctly. Well done so far though.