Feedback for Ashley's Evaluation

Ashley, for the most part your draft answers to the evaluation questions are extremely thoughtful and very well written. The total word count for the answers should be between 1000 and 1500 words though, so you need to do a bit of editing down as your draft comes in over 2000 words. You could probably express your use of conventions in question 1 a bit more succinctly, and some of the text in the social groups question is not 100% relevant. Also, within your answer to that question, try and comment a bit more overtly on the specific social group that makes up your set of characters. As well as law abiding citizens versus criminals, it is also the case that only white males are used as characters in your thriller. Perhaps you could think about linking this to a point you make later about target audiences. Very well done so far though.